So I kinda like the first logo BG you sent as it's simpler so reads better at a distance. But I like the lettering here better, just still too small.
But overall now that I've seen some other submissions, the vibe is just too reserved. Needs to feel more fun, adventurous, and fantasy! Which means more color and...???
It may not be the right fit for your style of design, I duno -- but just wanted to be forward with you so you know where we're at. (I think the best inspiration for color/style would be World of Warcraft if you want to get a better idea for the vibe/direction I'm looking for.)
Hey! I like how clean/readable this is, and the grungy texture! I think the words "PEN" and "BLADE" will need to be a bit bigger/more prominent and tough I like the clean feel, I think the font needs to have a more bold "epic, medieval fantasy" vibe to it. (Without getting too overstated/cartoony.) Love that little touch of the pieces cut out from the line and pencil that adds a neat dream-like quality and keeps it from feeling too generic too.
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So I kinda like the first logo BG you sent as it's simpler so reads better at a distance. But I like the lettering here better, just still too small.
But overall now that I've seen some other submissions, the vibe is just too reserved. Needs to feel more fun, adventurous, and fantasy! Which means more color and...???
It may not be the right fit for your style of design, I duno -- but just wanted to be forward with you so you know where we're at. (I think the best inspiration for color/style would be World of Warcraft if you want to get a better idea for the vibe/direction I'm looking for.)
Really appreciate the work and everything so far!
Thanks!!
~Shams
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