Hi Twonzone! Thanks for participating in our contest! We like your logos. Just a few feedback. I like very much the idea in logo #1, that mix the objects with the letters. However we would like to avoid the association with a specific kind of fishing, and this logo does that. We like Logo #27 and #26 also, it has a concept of speed and that is very important for our business. Thanks!
Hi Twonzone! I didn´t like very much the font you used for Pesca Artesanal on your last entry #48. I think it doesn´t combine well with the font you used for "Peixes Ultrafrescos" that in this case is great!
Hi twonzone! Could you try to work on the concept #70 without using the association with a fishing line? It could be a variation of the #70 or a totally new one. I like the letters working as objects as the "x" and the "o". Thanks!
HI twonzone. I prefer your #107 than #108. Yes you can and should try a variation for the shape of the "o" fish. Actually the one on #107 doesn´t look very much like the letter "o".
The connection between X and O is good but you can and shoud try other possibilities also.
Hi Twonzone. Could you work a little more on "Pesca Artesanal" on #109? I feel it is very light and is not "fitting" well with "Peixes Ultrafrescos". If possible give me more options on that. No need to change Peixes Ultrafrescos and the "x-o" connection, unless you have a new idea or feel the necessity. Thanks!
HI twonzone! I like your your #131. I think italic didn´t work well with Peixes Ultrafrescos font. But can you try another solution for "Pesca Artesanal"? The options you provided are variations of the font only. It undoubtedly improved the final result but I would like to see other options in terms of design for the "Pesca Artesanal", is it possible ? May be a solution like the association "x-o", may be another solution. Please feel free to propose. I think we are reaching our objective. Thanks !
HI twonzone. Yes, I think we need more options... Kindly note A) I didnt´t like the wave concept on #132 I think it breaked the balance of the logo. B) I think de flag font is heavy, now Pesca Artesanal is heavier than what we want. Actually I think we don´t need the flag / wave concept C) I made a subjective association with the logo that I want to share with you. Let´s focus on the fish OK? First, it comes from de "x" letter, lets say, the sea. Secondly it passes very fast throught our company "o" letter And at last it reaches de house of our clients: the missing link ! :) This missing link should pass this idea and should work as a balance object in the "Pesca Artesanal", it could be a plate, a dish, or something more subjective and clean/simple. Fell free to work on this proposal. If you need more input I will be happy to give to you. Thanks very much ! Leo
Hi twonzone. I´ve seen #134 and #133. I would like something simpler and subtle. Can be something like the link idea, but much better worked, of course. Thanks
Hi twonzone. Thanks for the new proposals! #135 I didn´t like the dish, may be it is too obvious or may be it resembles very much a famous logo of a campaign we have here in Brazil called "zero hunger". This camapign is focused in feeding the poor and homeless. #136 may be a way to the solution but i didn´t like the superposed lines. It seems complex, and heavy. Actually the idea is to give more balance to the best option so far #131. My suggestion was the plate/dish one (to work the 3 steps idea - sea/company/client) but could be a line, a dash or another object, may be even a wave (in this case forgetting about the last step - dish/plate). Thanks very much for all your cooperation! :) Leo
Hi twozone! Going back to entry #131... We have been trying to give more balance to it by working with a new object (dish, wave, etc) All of the subsequent entries have focused in this direction. But I think we should try something simpler. Could you try to reach the balance of "Pesca Artesanal" working only with the letters / font of "Pesca Artesanal" ? Thank you very much!
Congratulations Twozone! You are the winner ! Just one thing, can you provide other aplications of the logo? I would like one with "reversal color" / negative. I mean, with a blue background and white letters. And one last try, is it possible to prepare a version with "Pesca Artesanal" with the same extention of Ultrafrescos? Thanks
Hi Twonzone! Now you are 14 ! :) Thanks I will check and return to you. My email is leonardo.marquez@ig.com.br. Can you send me a version with "Pesca Artesanal" filling the blank space to the right of the word? This way it will be alligned with "Ultrafrescos". Thanks Leo