HI there - we love the concept, perhaps ---it could be more fleshed out - but we do love it! We love the size and placement and sentiment - we are curious what it would look like it color - perhaps a beautiful deep green?
We think that the font should probably match the image - would you agree? Can you also play with a couple of softer fonts?
We love your "Huckleberry Finn", Hemmingwayish, Faulkner-like talent and vision!
Hi Zennatree Thank you for the very kind feedback and my apologies for the slow response in getting back to you with some revisions. v2. tweaked / bolded graphic a bit and added the deep green as suggested. I think the color has definitely helped.. script font might be too busy though...? happy to make any revisions. all the best gheist
Hi there - we like what you've done; however I agree that the font is a little busy - perhaps try some more...
We also see that the head of the boy in the original is a bit more defined - I think that when you colored it; a bit of that was lost - do you think you can address that?
Also, the boy in the first rendering appears younger - something about the torso...and again about the head and the hair - we like the innocence conveyed in the first one...