Liked color of background bricks from first entry, still would like to see bit lighter colored letters, with a brick color or reddish outline, brown doesn't pop enough. Thank You
Loooked at your portfolio concepts, i like those that were brighter and layed out like marula, joygame and maybe pirate rentals. Using the background image you have is also important..the bricks..Thank you
Added more dimension to the letters like from the other entries you referenced, used more of a brick red and went back to the original color for the bricks. Please let me know if this one is heading in a better direction!
Jason looks good, could you include some separation between PAVE & LOCK. Could you also try shrinking PAVELOCK so it is inside the oval. Also could you try a off-set version, Pave set up higher than LOCK with your latest and the revisions mentioned above. Heading in the right direction...Thank you
I've tried to keep all of the revision ideas separate so that you can see how each change impacts the look of the logo. From here. let me know which changes you would like to see mix/matched together.
To clarify, another designer accused me of tracing a picture in my first few designs which is why I've withdrawn them. This avoids any confusion and prevents another designer from getting me barred from your contest.