Patriot Strength ClubLogo Design Contest

Can you clean up the lat's on this guy, they kind of look like gills. But I really like the concept. Thanks

Hello Xyloid! Thanks for the feedback! Here is my update - #57

Sincerely,
Lloyd

Lloyd, Thanks, the changes are just right. I really like the shape of the crest it sits on. It adds flair. It's hard to rank these anymore. do you think you could make the mountains more prominent in the picture without throwing off the great work you've done?

Hello Xyloid! Thanks for the feedback, I'll see what I can do with the mountains.

Sincerely,
Lloyd

Hello Xyloid! Here are the variations for the mountains in the background. - #62, #63, #64, #65

Thank you!

Sincerely,
Lloyd

Hello Xyloid! I have updated the mouth of my entry, it is now open to project strength and at the same time a patriotic expression - #78

PATRIOT name moved to top layer - #79

By the way, is the gun necessary? If so please let me know so I can add it. Thank you!

Sincerely,
Lloyd