I think I like this one without the smoke. If you could think of a way to more generally add something symbolizing and exposure, that'd be good. Maybe some sort of shapes outside the lung
That's getting closer. We do research on lots of different exposures (e-cigarette, maternal diabetes, air pollution), so maybe you could find a way to make it more general? Alternatively, make the smoke smaller and less a focal point?
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Thanks for feedback, update proposal #189 #188 and #187, let me know your thoughts.
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Jefry
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Thanks for feedback, reduce smoke size #145, also make lung suck factory smoke pollution #141 and #142.
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Jefry
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How about smoke outside the lung #139 and #140, let me know your thoughts.
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Jefry
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Thanks for feedback, how about exposure represent with smoke inside the lung? #138 and #137, let me know your thoughts.
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Jefry
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If you don't mind, would you tell me detail about exposure do you mean?
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Jefry
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Thanks for feedback, update proposal with add maternal/fetal interface #128 and #129, let me know your thoughts.
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Jefry
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I submit a new designs proposal. I am open for feedback, don't hesitate to let me know. Your feedback is very useful
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Jefry