Party in a boxLogo Design Contest

Hello,
First entry. I tried to represent all aspects of your business. Please let me know if there is anything you wish changed. I'd be happy to make any adjustments you might want.
Thanks!
Pam

(This comment references Entry #2)

pretty good

the chefs hat needs a little more detail, looks like a cloud right now, also we have a florist and photographer
if that helps in maybe making stars flowers, just a thought

Hi,

Thanks for the feedback! I'll make the changes to #2 and post the revision for your review.

Pam

Hi,
Here's the revised version of my first entry. I revised the chef's hat, added a camera, and add some flowers. Let me know if you'd like any further revisions on this particular design. I'd be glad to make any changes you might want.
Thanks!
Pam

(This comment references Entry #4)

Hey Pam

My wife wants a more elegant look,
elegant box with ribbon=with the following elements Chef/Caterer DJ Photographer Florist
we cater to brides and corporations

Hi,
Sure thing! I'll make the changes and post a revised design for your review. Thanks so much for the feedback!
Pam

i made a mistake on my description

we want more elegant and not cartoon or to much color

i changed colors
black, white, bronze, platinum

these colors are more elegant looking

thanks

Ok. Thanks for the updated info. I'll make the necessary adjustments.

Pam

Per your comment, I made this more elegant with a classic looking gift box with ribbon. Changed the colors to black and white with bronze and platinum. Maintained a few pieces of color to play up "party".
Feedback appreciated.
Thanks!
Pam

(This comment references Entry #23)

Variation on entry #23.

(This comment references Entry #24)

#24 is a winner. i like #23 but 24 is cleaner

could you tilt the lid in 24 like you did in 23. 23 is just a tad to busy. like the elegance of 24 but the chefs hat cd etc need to be more like 23

awesome job you are right on the mark

Thanks for the great feedback. I'll make the corrections and post the revision for your review.

Pam

Hi,
This design is basically a hybrid of entry #24 and entry #23. I tilted the lid like in #23, raised and enlarged the chef's hat, and added the CD from #23. I kept the camera the same. Please let me know if this is exactly what you meant , or if you want any further revisions. I'd be happy to change things around for you.
Thanks!
Pam

(This comment references Entry #37)

Hi,
This entry is basically #23 without the clutter. I deleted some confetti, and deleted the "photos" to open it up more. Please let me know if this is more to your liking.
Thanks! Pam.

(This comment references Entry #38)

Hi,
This is a variation on #37. Just in case I misinterpreted where you wanted the box lid, I raised it up so it's in the same area as in entry #24, but with the tilt of #23. This helps to create the "popping the lid off" impression.
Hope you like. If you'd like to see the same treatment for #38, just let me know. I didn't want to spam your contest with unnecessary entries.
Thanks! Pam

(This comment references Entry #39)

still like #24 no cd==no flowers on box perfec

just chefs hat brought out just a tad and camera

nice designs

should i rank the others or just disregard them

i am new to this

Hi,
Thanks for the feedback. So, you want me to just bring the camera & chef's hat out a bit, and leave the flowers where they are? Just want to be clear.
You can rank the others if you wish; we earn ranking points for everything that is ranked. However it's not fair to the other designers to give 1, 2, & 3 ranking to basically the same design. A different design, by the same designer is better, if you like that design also.
Hope this helps!
Pam

Hi,
Here's the revision of #24. I brought the chef's hat and the camera out just a bit, per your request. Just let me know if you want any further adjustments. Always happy to do it.
Thanks! Pam

(This comment references Entry #45)

could i see the chefs hat and design of #4 pop a little more
we like the box==but like the pop of #4

Sure thing. I hope I've got this straight. You want me to work on #4, and make the chef's hat pop more.

Or, did you want me to make the box one (#45) pop like #4? Please clarify. I can do both, but want to make sure I'm working on the design you want first.

Thanks!
Pam

we like the #45 but want it to pop like #4

thanks

Ok, will do that. Thanks!

Hi,
Here's the revision you requested. I brought the chef's hat out even more, increased its size, and strengthened the outline in an effort to make it pop more. I added some more color to help with the pop factor.
Please let me know if this is what you were seeking, or if it needs further revising. Thanks!
Pam

(This comment references Entry #56)

Hi,
Here's a little bit different one. I angled the box so there would be the box interior behind the chef's hat to make it stand out more. Feedback appreciated!
Pam

(This comment references Entry #57)

Hi,
This is a revision of #56. I enlarged the chef's hat, the camera & the notes. Added a highlight to the camera. Added more shading to the chef's hat. And moved the chef's hat to the fore to make it pop more. Let me know what you think!
Pam

(This comment references Entry #60)

Hi!

Thanks so much for choosing my design for your logo. This was a fun, enjoyable project to work on.

I just uploaded the final EPS and JPEG files for your review. If you see anything you wish tweaked or added, just let me know. I want this to be perfect for you.

Thanks again. You have been great to work with!

Pam