Trying with 1 color after the overly, but there is problem for readability, so I make a little different composition with the "p" and "a" and with the "t".
Really like the transparency concept of the 'box' abstraction. It suggests shelter without being a domestic building icon (which suits our scope of services and business model better), the colours are very effective and it suggests a 'P'; very clever. Your design has taken on board key concepts of the brief and presented them really well.
Keeping the colour combination would it be possible to explore the transparent colour overlay in the typography?
I see this as possibly being done in two ways, (I am sure there are more); one being overlays suggesting elements of the existing font being overlaid, or alternatively building up the letters A, R, T, and I in a similar manner to the Box 'P' logo.
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General comments apply to both logos:
Really like the transparency concept of the 'box' abstraction. It suggests shelter without being a domestic building icon (which suits our scope of services and business model better), the colours are very effective and it suggests a 'P'; very clever. Your design has taken on board key concepts of the brief and presented them really well.
Keeping the colour combination would it be possible to explore the transparent colour overlay in the typography?
I see this as possibly being done in two ways, (I am sure there are more); one being overlays suggesting elements of the existing font being overlaid, or alternatively building up the letters A, R, T, and I in a similar manner to the Box 'P' logo.