Great start! We would like to see the human images be female, identifiable by a pony tail hairstyle and slight figure modifications. Also, we'd like to see how it looks with only the bottom quadrant of the shield as black on white. Thanks!
Also, ParkourEDU should be one word. I know the all capitals make the EDU stand out less but maybe you can get rid of the space and highlight it in a different way?
I like how the people in 11 and 12 go outside of the frames. I'd like to see that same idea incorporated a little more into both people on the sides and the one on top. i'd also like to see versions where the bottom person is the only one of the 4 people that is black on white. the rest would be as white on black.
the person in the bottom frame has come to a stop so the pony tail should be resting down, not sticking out anymore.
lastly, I still would prefer that PARKOUR EDU be written as 1 word, not 2. ParkourEDU should be written as one word like "ParkourEDU" or "PARKOUREDU" if there is a way to stylize PARKOUR and EDU slightly different.
new update at entry #55 #56 make people inside frame out, and with also with word "ParkourEDU" or "PARKOUREDU" option if there any else, feel free for any comment
We decided that we like the all black version in #56 better. Can you take the updated shield from #67 and put it on #56? And make the dots from #56 into stars?
Also, we would like to remove the "est 2006" part. We would also like to update the human images to be gender neutral.
thanks for the updates. we like #80 a lot. a few final details we would like to see modified:
- We would like to see the phrase "être et durer" written in the white space around the shield. sort of like in this example: http://blogs.answersingenesis.org/blogs/georgia-purdom/files/2011/10/ModernSeal.jpg - We are a little concerned that the 4 human images are inconsistent. We would like to see if you can make all of them the same size. For example, the one on the top seems to be thicker and bigger than the rest. The one on the right has baggier pants than the one on the left. I know that their pants will be slightly different depending on where they are in the jump, but we would like to see them look a tad more consistent. We would like to see the pants be slightly baggy toward the top and tighter/tapered around the ankles/lower leg. - We would like to see some other symbols used in place of the stars or dots. Something that feels university like and fits the rest of the theme. - Lastly, we would like to see a final version where the colors on the shield are inverted and the words and area inside the main ring on the outside are inverted.
ok than please see new entry #83 #84 #85 #86 for make 4people more same size, flip black and white also changing star to different object for presenting university
the people look better except the one on the right is a bit smaller than the rest. also, it is important that the legs stay straight on the person on the right. there is a slight bend in the knees right now. the pants look good.
i think we would like to see "être et durer" be less obvious. you could try making it smaller or less bold. we don't want it to stand out as much as the other text. also, i think it would look better if it curved around the circle instead of being at 90 degree angles. lastly, can you make the DURER read from top to bottom so that the whole phrase is written in a clockwise reading pattern?
ok, you fixed the durer part and that looks good. can you make etre et durer blend in better somehow? maybe with curves and a less obvious presentation? right now, it stands out too much and it doesn't seem to flow well with the rest of the logo. thanks.
#96 is our new favorite. We would still like to see the ETRE ET DURER a little more discrete. Maybe thinner lines or smaller text? Just a tiny bit more discrete.
i think the white lines for the shield are too thin now. I would like to see them thicker like they were in previous designs.
#101 is great. I think we are almost done. We would like to see a few other variations of the "PARKOUREDU" text. Some simpler fonts would be good to see as a comparison. thanks!
I like the font in #108 and #106 the best. Can you make a version where the "ARKOUR" slightly smaller like it was before? I think this might be our last request. Thanks!
#110 looks great. the last thing we would like to see is 2 more versions of the bottom human silhouette. we are a little concerned with the posture of the current one and would like to see if either of these images would look better:
hmm, i was hoping to see new silhouettes out of those 2 new images i posted. it looks like you modified the old one so the proper positioning looks a little off. the new images have straight arms instead of bent and also less of a hunch/curve in the upper back. can you actually use the new images and make silhouettes out of them with an added topknot hairstyle? thanks for your patience. we need the body position to be perfect since it is displaying good form on the exercise.
great. i like #115 but the bottom person is off balance. if you compare the old versions, you'll see that his center is right over the front part of his foot. all you need to do i think is rotate the silhouette slightly clockwise. and last of all, the pants are a bit baggier than the other silhouettes so if you could make those a little slimmer, that would be great. thanks.
the pants are good but the bottom person still needs to be rotated a little more clockwise. check the most recent images i posted and you will see he is balancing on his forefoot, so they need to be horizontal to the ground. his center should be right over the forefoot.