Hi, I like the structure here but I'm not sure about the font on the left part. Could you try out something with a little bit more weight, but still very simple and classy? (i like that its a sans font)
this is an interesting alternative to the other similar one you submitted. This does not have the hospital feeling I got in the other onw, so in that way this is better. It still has the issue of being long and rectangular.
Similar comments here as to #32, could you try with the alternative text? I like it. Maybe the PAR letters are a bit heavy or unbalanced? The distances between these letters don't feel perfect, somehow.
Hi again, I didn't realize this was also your design before posting on the other one. Here, I think you solve part of the problem with the shape - we could use only the left half of the logo when we need a square one. Could you try this with the alternative text for the small size text (the foundation to prevent antibiotic resistance, instead of protecting modern healthcare)?
Hi twonzone! Thanks for this logo - I like the cleanliness, but I think it has a bit too much hospital feeling? For the text below, could you make a version that has "the foundation to prevent antibiotic resistance" instead of "protecting modern healthcare...)?
I am a little worried that this logo might be unpractical, both because of that it has some letters that are very small and will be blurry when the logo is used in a small size, and also because the logo is so rectangular. We would need something a bit more square-shaped to work for twitter, facebook profile pic, etc. If you're up to trying some more square shaped version in a similar style, that would be very interesting to see!
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I am a little worried that this logo might be unpractical, both because of that it has some letters that are very small and will be blurry when the logo is used in a small size, and also because the logo is so rectangular. We would need something a bit more square-shaped to work for twitter, facebook profile pic, etc. If you're up to trying some more square shaped version in a similar style, that would be very interesting to see!