PanacheLogo Design Contest

I really like the direction you are going with this design. Is there any way to make 67 a little larger so it is easier to read that is says Panach? Can you also add the works Dashing Confidence and Reckless Courage with Extreme Style?

Thank you for the ranking! I appreciate that.
Sure I will work on that.
Actually the size in proportion I will adjust with the tag line. But since the tag line is longer I will adjust you name accordingly to keep the balance.

Let me know when you get the revision what you think of it. I'll post it in about an hour.
Thank you,
Sincerely,
Teresa

I'm giving you several variations with subtle differences. Trying to keep the impact of your name and incorporate the tag line and keep it in balance. The font needs to be light so that it doesn't overpower your name.
Let me know what you think. Pay close attention to the subtle changes and if you could relay back to me what you like or don't like I can make the changes for you.
Thank you,
Tere

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This one I pulled the 'P' up on the same baseline to create even leading

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Here I extended the P down to even with the tag line

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This one the baseline on your name is even and the tag line is gray so that I could increas the size of the letters and not visually interfere with your name

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This one I decreased the pt size of the line to make it the stroke finer line.
I will be watching for your response.
Thank you once again,
Tere

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I see you asked for an extension.....what would you like to see?

I showed the design to some of the other owners and there only concern is being able to make out the word Panache. Is there a way to make the letters larger? Do something so it is a bit easier to read?

Yes, I will work on that for you.

Will upload it in about an hour.

Here are 2 revisions with the letter opened up more.

(This comment references Entry #117)

Here's one where with the letters in a different stroke...thought you may like this on too.

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Can you make 117 even more bold? Just so it is even easier to read? Also, with that one just include the word Extreme Style Under it not the other two words. I love the design, I just need to stop hearing people say they can not read it! thanks so much

I'll send revisions this afternoon.

Thanks,
Tere'

Here is per your request...I only increased the boldness by .1 to add a little at a time because too bold creates a different problem with legibility. Be patient with me and I will get it to where everyone is pleased...but also remember something that may help in the discussions, sometimes just the suggestion of a name has more power on the memory, which is what everyone is always trying to achieve anyway. The name as a whole is legible in the total form looking past the need for the perfection of perfectly formed letters. I worked on the style as an impact and a style that goes with the atmosphere shown in your photo. The name can also be enhanced on print, web and signage with a complimentary 'gold' adding a lot of light and reflection. Well, that is the creative artist in me speaking..hope it helps.
Thank you
Tere

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This is with the note above.

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^ ^ sometimes I need to look away for a few minutes to see changes that are needed.

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Pushing this one a little bolder...hope this is helping you see the possibilities.

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Can you change the Extreme Style on #125 to 447? Thanks so much.

Panche
447

Is this what you mean? Let me know, I'm here and will check frequently throughout your contest.

(This comment references Entry #193)

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Thank you!!!

I am working on getting the files uploaded to you within the hour then I'll wait for your approval of the files in your account!

Afterwards any additional files I can send via email. We then can communicate through email.

Thank you once again!!
Sincerely,
Tere