#13 would look better if the helmet was more exaggerated and aggressive looking.i would extend the 2 cheek pieces down more and make them more pointed/dramatic. I would add a plume to the top and use this to introduce a highlight colour (say blue or red).
#9 all shadows need to be on the same side. I don't recognise this immediately as a Knights helmet. Maybe some more holes or vents in the helmet would make it more visually interesting?
in #13 maybe the cheek elements of the helmet could extend down either side of the 'A' in PALADIN to better integrate the graphic with the words. I think the cheek elements should extend down further than the nose element (and more pointed/aggressive). Maybe some more holes or vents in the helmet would make it more visually interesting? Maybe make the eye holes thinner and less round (perhaps the same thickness as the vertical slots to make the helmet appear more aggressive)
In both #13 and #9 i would add a plume/bristles to the top and use this to introduce a highlight colour (say blue or red).
# 22 delete the words design & construct and purple fruit. Make the holes for the eyes and beside the nose the white background color as you did in #13.Leave half the helmet as silver metallic with black holes and make the other half the helmet all black with white holes (ie in shadow). I preferred the words in # 13 (ie capitals) but would like the top of the 2nd 'A' in PALADIN to fit neatly up in between the 2 cheek pieces of the helmet. This will make the helmet and the text more integrated. Narrow the nose piece a little and add blue bristles (ie like a mohawk hairstyle) to the top of the helmet as a feature color.
#13 this I still my preferred. I would just add a blue stiff bristle brush/comb (like a mohawk haircut) to the top of the helmet. Maybe position the helmet directly over the top of the 2nd 'A' in Paladin. Increase the spacing between the letters of the word 'projects' to make it the same width as the word paladin.
#23 I would change the shape of the cheek pieces of the helmet to make the 'A' fit neatly into the bottom of the helmet. The helmet can't go over the 'D'
I would like the words and the logo to be more integrated (not seperate). I would welcome your suggestions on this. please also refer to my brief and look at the attachment called 'logo'. i would like you do try to do a better version of this.