I'm sorry but it hasn't got the feel i'm after, it's not bold enough, the overall image is a bit to small, i'm after something very simple but very bold, with maybe one or two colours in there, i'm drawn towards subtle reds or pinks, i hope that helps.
thank again for the feedback, sorry but my english its bad :) , i hope my new entry is interesting for you .... im open for any change ........ Ciao Francesco