Thanks BusinessBuilder. This is an interesting tangent. I think the message from this though, is less natural beauty and authority, a little heavy on the science - perhaps reminds me of an atom exploding? Great work though, thanks again.
Thanks again. I like the less formal approach this time, but I think the elements are a little disjointed - the connection not clear - and its not working for me. I appreciate the time you put into the work though, very much.