A few comments: - we do like what you've done with the number #31, but we'd like to see the same logo, without the nets behind the letters. - Also, we'd like to see a different approach: take a look at this link: http://www.shutterstock.com/pic.mhtml?id=98992394 (we do not own the property right on this image, this is just an example). you will find the kind of tag and tag color we would actually like to see on the logo. Basically, on a new logo, we'd like to see the same kind of tag used, and the "Oulala" writings in orange on the tag (you could use the same font you are currently using).
We have putten #30 in first place because we like the colors you have used for the logos (if you could even try to put more metalic in the grey it would be great) but we are not sure about the net... it's a good idea but we are afraid that its not obvious for everyone that it's a football net... and when the cage is present (entry#20) it makes it harder to read the logo... maybe you could try to put a football cage that would be the size of the tag of entry#49 with the net on the background ? Like this the goalposts will not be in the way.
One of my concern is that people will read ulala (not understanding that the ball is an "O"). Maybe you could try to include in each letter the drawing on the ball (polygon and lines).
Hi Vbollier, i will try as suggested, but i am not understand about this one : "Maybe you could try to include in each letter the drawing on the ball (polygon and lines)." my english is limited:) can you please explain me more about it.
On the football ball, their is polygons (a polygon is a form with 5 faces) links between them by some lines. The idea would be to include also those polygons and lines inside the letters... like this all the letters and the ball will have the same appearence, and people will therefore notre read "ulala" any more.
i made some update: #53 #54 #55 and try another way: #56 #57 let me know what you think, i will be back with a version of a big cage behind the wording
Thank you for those new logos. Looking at the result, putting the drawing of the ball in the letters is probably not such a good idea... because it's not easy to read. Your two ideas (#57 and #56) helps a lot because we can't read "ulala" anymore. On the #57, could you please use the original "O" of the logo and try an other version without the net and the orange square at the back. on #56, could you please try to move the ball inside the "O" a bit on the side (I like the fact that the center of the letter in not centered... again like the center of the original "O"
I like #59... until know it is (for me) the best logo we have. Can you please try to put the original shape of "O" (please look at the original logo I sent).
Also on the entry "47" can you please try to make to goal appear more clearly and lower a lot the grey in the ball (in order to get unity between the all the letter... to read Oulala and not Ulala
Rafa had to sent me new entries (that I asked for) but because the tournament was closed he could send it anymore... so I had to put him temporary in first position in order to receive his work. As soon as I have received them I will put you back in first so that you can send me also your new logos.
Reagrding #113, thank you but when I was talking about the football cage, I was more thinking of a version without the net... because the net does not help the visibility.
Entry #87 and #111 and #72 (the 3 that we love the more)... in the loop of the letter "A" we can see a little bit of one of the ball polygon. Could you please take it away... like this we may see the "a" better.
on your logo #115 and #116, could you please try two things: - one logo with the football a bit more on the right, so that it will be right above the "A" of Oulala, and not at all against the "L" - one logo with the football a bit more on the left, so that it will above the "L" more.
Basically, we're just trying to see what would be the most readable, with the football still being visible.
Hello again:) I try to apply your latest request to #115, please check: #123 #124 I see you've extend the contest for new ideas, so if you have new brief, i would like to try it
Thank you. We don't like the result of entry #124 (sorry) Regarding the entry #123, can you please put the ball a bit more on the right and at the same height than #116.
Also a little thing, can you please try to finish the boarder of the ball (their is a little bit missing in the "a").
Hi Vbollier, Please check update for 123: #125 #126, i am not sure that i get about the ball border thing request, could you explain me more? or are the latest updates corrected?
yes #125 was what we asked.... because it is strange that a part of the ball disapears... but when it's their, it's even more difficult to read the name. We are trying to find a way to increase the readibility of the logo... could you please try to move the ball on different places around the name, even maybe changing sometimes the size of the ball... we are not far from the result we want be we need to find the best place for the ball
Thank you for these new submissions, they give us a better idea of where we'd like to put the football.
On your number #125, could you please try to put the football a bit higher (and still on the right of the writing, overall), so that only a very tiny part of the ball is covered by the "a" of "Oulala"?
We like your entry #131. However, could you try to put the football still a bit higher and a bit on the right, so that its border doesn't go "inside" the "a", and therefore, the "a" stays more visible. We do prefer the football size on this entry (#131).
Thank you for your latest entry...however, we still prefer your #130 so far.
Regarding your #129, could you try to have a different contrast between the football in the back and the Oulala letters? maybe the Oulala letters could have the same colors as the one on #130, and the football a bit whiter?
Therefore, the letters would be more visible, and the football would be more "included" within the logo.