OneParkLogo Design Contest

i really like the both one but could you make font variations because i don't like this one.

Thank you for the feedback.

Hey there,

1) could you try to put the logo at the left for your next proposition

2) Could you make color variations: maybe black / silver / grey / white for the 41, 22, 46

3) We also need to make understand to our clients that it's a little club, elegant, premium

4) Try other font

Ill let you do, you see to be a good designer !
You are in the good way to succeed for the 2nd round

Thanks.
Working on it.

Hey there,

You made a very good job but we actually want to see more to select you for the second round. Your variations for the "P" or the "O" are succeed. Here is our remarks and propositions:

1) Our service will be parking via a mobile application. Our idea is to put a P inside a square to express mobile application idea for the pictogram:

1) A square like a mobile application for the pictogram.
http://www.google.fr/imgres?q=mobile+application&um=1&hl=en&sa=N&tbo=d&biw=1314&bih=692&tbm=isch&tbnid=J-xRfK2OV-uN9M:&imgrefurl=http://lsvp.com/2012/04/19/how-to-build-the-next-huge-mobile-app/&docid=Qv4Cw8SOuF497M&imgurl=http://lsvp.files.wordpress.com/2012/04/iphone_apps.jpg&w=5333&h=3358&ei=VnT5UJHSF8WWhQePj4DIAw&zoom=1&iact=rc&dur=414&sig=115322963564548528364&page=1&tbnh=126&tbnw=200&start=0&ndsp=25&ved=1t:429,r:19,s:0,i:179&tx=99&ty=75

2) you find good ideas for the #22 #44 #55 #45 but do not put it on the circle but in a square

3) try to make relief/ 3D with it.

4) Try other foot, those one are not esthetic at all. But continue to make it with O capital and P capital "OnePark"
i submit you some other font for testing but could you try to test other one not just that:
Geo sans light
Caviar Dreams Bold police
-satellite
Juilius sans One
Fjalla One
Junge
Text me one
Comfortaa

5)Inspire you from those two logos:
Kickfolio: http://kickfolio.com
Square: https://squareup.com
Linkedin: http://www.linkedin.com

5) for the colors BE CREATIVE ! but we prefer blue grey/ silver grey / pearl grey

Good luck. I let you working on it :)

foot in the 4) = font

Hey there,

for the #130, i really like it, could you put a part of the word "OnePark" in the same blue like the pictogram please.

and try to get off the circle of the "P" pictogram

thx

and please mix the #41 "P" pictogram with the #130 font and logo