You made a very good job but we actually want to see more to select you for the second round. Your variations for the "P" or the "O" are succeed. Here is our remarks and propositions:
1) Our service will be parking via a mobile application. Our idea is to put a P inside a square to express mobile application idea for the pictogram:
2) you find good ideas for the #22#44#55#45 but do not put it on the circle but in a square
3) try to make relief/ 3D with it.
4) Try other font, those one are not esthetic at all. But continue to make it with O capital and P capital "OnePark" i submit you some other font for testing but could you try to test other one not just that: Geo sans light Caviar Dreams Bold police -satellite Juilius sans One Fjalla One Junge Text me one Comfortaa
This is just exemple stay free to propose to us other one