Hi Marcelo, I like very much your creativity, especially #51 we help people make a step to them and to others. With human expression we are looking for care/attention. I do not feel this aspect in #51. Does it clarify the way you understand our need? :) Philippe
Thank you for the feedback. I will work on adding a bit more of a human touch to the logo. I saw this contest only a short time ago, so I wanted to get in a few ideas before the first phase was over. It's almost 2:00am here, but I'll be doing some work on this morning. Once again, thank you and I look forward to participating in your contest.
Hi Marcelo, I just talked to my partners, we really like your ideas! can you please try the following : - #99 for the 2 people, with the text (police and color) like #75 or #93 - another option with the symbol on the left
The grey is important but feel free to show us suggestions with other colors than orange thank you in advance :) Philippe
Thank you for the message. I submitted several new versions. Please let me know if you would like to see any additional changes. As the contest moves into the judging phase, only the designer ranked first will be able to submit changes. If you require changes from any of designers, you can always put them in first and then re-rank them again. Thank you.
Hi Marcelo, We really like best your bodies for #151, can you please change the text and colors, using the ones of #157 or #139 (the creativity is for the bodies, there is no issue of copy) thank you Philippe
I uploaded some new versions. I made the grey darker and tried a couple of different thinner fonts. I also, made the bodies in different proportions to the text. (Some are bigger than the others.) Please feel free to suggest any revision if like smaller bodies, bigger text or vice versa.
I did a few size and I moved the first person's left arm a bit further out too. I also did some very subtle changes in the text, also capitalizing the "L". I kept the kerning (space between letters) a bit more loose. I can close the gaps, so that the letters are a bit closer to each other, but it was looking maybe a bit too crowded. Let me know if you want the letters tighter and I will change them.
Take care. (I'll be working over the weekend, so just let me know if you need anything else.)
I happened to be on the computer when you sent the last message. Here are two more variations with a smaller base line (they are the same point size in height, but one is set across the entirety of the name and the other is centered with the letters closer together).
Hi Marcelo both #177 and #178 are very nice, it will be difficult to choose can you please try to have the base line a little bit lighter for both, either thiner line or smaller with more space between the letters, or... ? thank you :) Philippe
I uploaded these in batches, so that it may be easier to keep track since the details are very subtle. (my comments are all based on your base line request from #177 and #178.)
#180 and #181 are the same size and thickness, but with the "grey 15% lighter" in color.
#182 and #183 are the same size and same grey but the "thickness of the letters is thinner" and "more spread out".
#184 and #185 are the same size are a combination of the 2 above, "thinner letters, more spread out, grey 15% lighter".
I just added #186, so that you can see the version with the bodies in the middle in the exact same font as the version with the bodies on the left. Previously, the version with "bodies middle" had Myriad font for OneStepForward and Helvetica base line.
"Bodies left" is using Helvetica for both name and base line.
Hi Marcelo great, thank you i think it will be the last correction : only for #182 can you try to have the 2 bodies closer from each other? :) Philippe
Hi Marcelo, We would like to finalize with #189 Can you please put the 2 bodies a few milimeters more on the left and modifiy the base line police, more in the direction of #139 and #141 thank you Philippe
Sorry for the delay - we had our income taxes deadline today :(
Anyway, I'm now back on track. #188 has the bodies more to the left and #189 is a bit further yet. Let me know if you would like them more or less to the left.
Hi Marcelo, #189 is fine for the bodies can we adjust the base line with another police, more like #139 or #141, more elegant and dark grey thank you Philippe
Hi Marcelo it was difficult to choose as we are 3 partners we have finally chosen #260 I would like to thank you for the great ideas you sent us, and for the different modifications. I hope we will have in the future the opportunity to work again and finalize. :) Philippe