One Source Medical Device Solutions, LLCLogo Design Contest

I have this logo that I have started with and I just think the problem with this is the serpent is to serpenty. It looks like the snake is about to strike. The snake should be there because that is the clinical symbol in healthcare but it should be a thinner snake. Thanks for the submissions in advance

The avatar I have next to my name is what I have started with. Thanks for the help.

I have ranked the ones i like according to the following reasons.

#1&2--I really like the cleanliness and colors. I think the font and lettering are correctly spaced. I would still like to see that clinical symbol though.
#8 & 9--you have the right idea. it just needs to be tightened up some and the symbol could become part of the buisness name.

Thanks for all the entries. I appreciate the opportunity to review them like this.

The Company name is "One Source", how about #20 with OneoSource ?
Cheersss..... :D

I withdrew my logo, but don't understand how your supposed to design a logo for a company with a slogan, that only one person can use.....ludicrous. I feel th CH holder has the say in who can use what, ultimately it is THEIR preference that decides a winner. So, if a designer can't amend their design to suit the likings of the CH, then what's the point. You have to nail it first shot, which I'm sure doesn't happen often. Such is the reason for several designs from the same designer.

What is required of LogoTourmanet clients:

•We require that you do not ask one designer to use elements or concepts from another designer. The general rule is that if a designer was the first to submit the idea, then they essentially own that concept or idea for the remainder of the contest. Any requests or ideas you have put in your contest brief are fair game and open to everyone. In addition concepts that are considered obvious will also be fair game, for example: a dog & cat for a pet hospital, shopping bag for an e-commerce company, a tooth for a dentist, initials for a lawyer, etc.

I hope I have not broken any of the rules in the contest. All the above tag lines from each design are in my contest brief.

I have re-ranked after thinking about it all day again. The designs are great, everyone. I think I still like #20 because of the clean pop it gives. I will keep reviewing. Thanks everyone

I think I may have withdrawn my ranked entry by accident.....trying to clean up my entry profile. Oops, I guess no points for me this time.