OnajiLogo Design Contest

I think (and hope) this is clever ;)
Feedback is more than welcome!

Deux

Variant #8

Hi deux

Liking the logo, especially that you have incorporated the Japanese script.

Is there a version you could do that would work as an icon / app type logo?

Also if you could try a few colours?

Joe

Sure thing Joe!
On it... appreciate the fantastic ranking!
Expect variants asap.

Where do you lean towards color wise?
Something in a cobalt blue and grey combo?

Deux

Colour I'll leave to you

The bottom line was to have a logo that looks great mono, which this does

I don;t pat myself on the back often.... but with this one..... oh yeah!

Hey Joe.... as you can see i have only uploaded one variant of the design.
I can say with pure honesty that i dont want to tweak it any further due to i think it is perfect in every way, shape and form.
Uploading a small variant in a minute or two, but..... you have to know when to stop on a design in order not to blunder it up and make it more busy and complicated than it needs to be.

Michael

Here is an update with a small slice on the J letter..... i don't think it is needed but you might like it more.
#67

Michael

Hi Michael,

I liked the variant as it helps to break up the name from the logo - if you have another tweak then cool - the more the better for me to select from especially as you as creatives see things and options I don't

Joe

Thanks for the feedback Joe... trying to figure out what else to do to it... but i keep stoping myself and saying.... stop f_cking with perfection!
Sorry if that sound vein in any way ;)

Michael