Thank you for being a part of this, coming up with a logo has been so difficult for us. My input so far is I'd like to see a stronger font and graphic. I like the direction
#1 was going with the font, but a feather is weak on the part of the graphic. Insight...Mt Olympus has two locations in the USA, one is on the Olympic Peninsula in Washington (where I grew up), and one is in Utah (where I currently live). I didn't want to add this in the intro because every logo would focus on the Mountain part, but since you have already gone in this direction I thought I'd share. This is the true reason we went with the name Olympus Fireworks. I'd like the logo to have reference to fireworks as well, but in a more complex design than your first attempt.
I hope this is helpful feedback, looking forward to what you can do.