#3 and #1: we like the stylized logo icon, but it doesn't really convey the message that we're doing tarts #2: the logo icon reflects the tart concept better. Could you please fine tune with the following changes? 1. Colors: white background, "Ohlala" written in chocolate brown 2. Logo icon: i would prefer the puff pastry to be in white (instead of light yellow) and chocolate brown for the layers (instead of light brown). On the top of the tarte, I would prefer a fushia fruit instead of a star (like a strawberry or rasperry with a touch of green if possible). 3. Can you please make some variations with more contemporary and straighter fonts?
Thank you for efforts so far, and I look forward to see your new ones!
The font is actually less contemporary than what you designed in Entry #4. Also, as far as the icon is concerned, what you done in #4 was fine, I only asked that the colors be changed, not the whole shape itself. The font for "Have a Treat, Eat a Tarte" is not distinctive and sober enough either.
Furthermore, as I pointed out in my previous comment, I don't really like the Tarte word in blue, it should be either pink or chocolate brown.
Do you think you could make those modifications, maybe?