One 'swoosh' and thicken the circular outline somewhat, please.
Thoughts on keeping the small flag solid but fix the upper section of the mast, does it need to be an outline or would it be more obvious with a thicker circular outline?
What about same blue in both water and sail, no gradient.
Remove all the stars except the largest.
Take the night sky and reduce it to a circle's outline in dark blue 004A96 or that from #170? (there should be a white space between the sail and the outline of the circle at that point)
Can we try this blue with a white sail, can we try 004A96 with a white sail, and can we try to keep the gradient from current number 1 selection but move to a white sail?
I proposed you 3 blue versions.
If you don`t like them, here`s a link with much more shades. Maybe you could indicate me from there something you like:
Can we try one proof with a white sail, no blue, a second proof with white sail and remove the gradient from the sky - you're going to have to recommend a shade of blue though that doesn't look cartoon-like and maintains the air of authority in the image. Make sense?
No, the sail and the waves don`t have the same color.
I added the white outline to the shooting star. Given the fact that the star is yellow, the outline is poorly visible due to lack of ontrast (yellow on white).
Can we remove the gradient in the sail as well in one proof and try another with simply a more bright blue - similar to the shade in logo ranked 10th, not so 'cartoon-like' though, if you understand my meaning?
Is this font here Garamond? It's good and bold. Like the size of the stars, can we remove the gradient to the colors and go with solid colors, please? Let's lighten the dark blue a tiny bit and see what it looks like? Not so light as to make the outline of the shooting star turn a sort of green - the night sky effect is good, something in the region of the third star from the left on the bottom; that shade of blue.
Thanks for all of your help and revision, apologies for the quiet weekend - we lost most connectivity during the weekend and had to attend to client matters as a priority. Still reviewing the fonts and having some recommendations. We'd also like to choose between with and without palm trees! Would probably like to shrink the stars (not including the 'shooting' star) a little. Keep the pattern but perhaps make them less of a focal point, as they were in earlier iterations.
Regarding the fonts, there are millions and millions of fonts out there.
I already submitted few font styles but it`s very difficult to guess what you prefer without knowing what type of font you might like.
Here are two links with free fonts. It would be much easier if you could indicate me from there something you like:
I think it represents better a mountain area. If I would have choosen a specific mountain range, the clients could think you are doing vacations only on that area.
Apologies, been a hectic mid-week! Looking great, thanks for your continued efforts!
Are you able to rotate (if necessary) and enlarge the constellation so that the stars are more dispersed? They can be hidden behind things, that's fine - was really looking for two or three on the right of the sail, like you've got here, and another 4-6 through the left of the sail. If it maintains integrity to the constellation that would be great. As mentioned, some of the stars from the constellation can be hidden or obscured behind other objects and remain unseen
Sorry! Should have noted to keep the main star, really like that effect - if you have to spread out the other constellation or it just can't fit nicely, that's fine too. Was hoping for a look like the current number 1 choice (your earlier iteration) and simply move those background stars around a little bit. If some of them become hidden behind the sail, that's fine! Just wanted a bit more distribution or some story to later be tied into the symbolism of the logo for when we make our first million haha
I put the stars to strengthen the idea of dreams and memories. I started with the Northern Light (the biggest star) and I transformed it into a falling star (like the one you make wishes to when you see it). The other stars don`t have a pattern but, if you want to see a certain constellation, just ask.
Feedback is looking and feeling good, was there a particular pattern to the background stars? An actual constellation or reasoning to their placement? A hidden message even?
What about making the left hand side mountains a little larger and dropping the trees, dropping the birds. Balloon becomes a small ship and lowers into the right a bit?
How about reviving this one but brightening up the star and simplifying the sails a bit - like the newer images but without the palm trees. It's getting some greater feedback among our higher tier clients
How about a little brighter blue - an aquamarine or turquoise color to match the existing center band of color in our current logo (our profile image here)
What about moving it into position alongside the rightmost tree, just atop the mountain but not in the center - or moving the palm trees over ever so slightly?
Still among personal favorites, some audience feedback that it may seem like we're only a boating service or that the night scene is a little less than friendly. Can we brighten one side a little and keep the gradient?
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What about removing a tree and adding a hot air balloon or a temple or other aspect of "adventure" in adventure travel???
Have client appointments throughout our afternoon here, will get more proper comment on these a little later in the afternoon - it really deserves the full focus. Thank you!
Revisiting this one, still a little unsure about the red, but the star is a very nice touch. What about adding a land feature in the background somewhere? We just don't want to give the impression we only offer cruises, make sense?
Really like this one, too - we'd care to reflect on the color scheme on this one as perhaps the yellow/gold in the star is necessary. Nicely done, thanks!
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Can also rest the edges of the circle on the tops of the mountain, please.
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Thoughts on keeping the small flag solid but fix the upper section of the mast, does it need to be an outline or would it be more obvious with a thicker circular outline?
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Remove all the stars except the largest.
Take the night sky and reduce it to a circle's outline in dark blue 004A96 or that from #170? (there should be a white space between the sail and the outline of the circle at that point)
Slight increase to the font size for `travel`
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If you don`t like them, here`s a link with much more shades. Maybe you could indicate me from there something you like:
https://support.spoonflower.com/hc/en-us/article_attachments/202969440/SpoonFlower_ColorMap_2-1.png
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Wondering about one small star in the space above the tail of the shooting star in the empty blue void to the left hand side of the image. Make sense?
A small one, similar in size to the smallest on the image already, just to balance the spread of the stars out.
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I added the white outline to the shooting star. Given the fact that the star is yellow, the outline is poorly visible due to lack of ontrast (yellow on white).
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Can we try with a white border to the shooting star?
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Can we remove the gradient in the sail as well in one proof and try another with simply a more bright blue - similar to the shade in logo ranked 10th, not so 'cartoon-like' though, if you understand my meaning?
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The font isn`t Garamond.
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Meanwhile, here`s the updated design.
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I already submitted few font styles but it`s very difficult to guess what you prefer without knowing what type of font you might like.
Here are two links with free fonts. It would be much easier if you could indicate me from there something you like:
www.dafont.com
www.urbanfonts.com
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I think it represents better a mountain area. If I would have choosen a specific mountain range, the clients could think you are doing vacations only on that area.
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Are you able to rotate (if necessary) and enlarge the constellation so that the stars are more dispersed? They can be hidden behind things, that's fine - was really looking for two or three on the right of the sail, like you've got here, and another 4-6 through the left of the sail. If it maintains integrity to the constellation that would be great. As mentioned, some of the stars from the constellation can be hidden or obscured behind other objects and remain unseen
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www.seasky.org/constellations/constellation-aquila.html
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What about removing a tree and adding a hot air balloon or a temple or other aspect of "adventure" in adventure travel???
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Have client appointments throughout our afternoon here, will get more proper comment on these a little later in the afternoon - it really deserves the full focus. Thank you!
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Here is the revised versions.
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