I love both of these. The little squares that you have on the ocular surface look sophisticate, simulate tears, which is our focus, and also sort of highlights our core technology. Beautiful.
Thank you, I was trying to convey the technology and the eye surface as the focus so I'm glad it came across! I will try a few more variations based on the same concept for you to consider.
Can we see the eye of number 2 with the font of number 1? I sort of like the tears or eyedrop or whatever that's above and the corner of the eye in number one. My colleagues sort of prefer the other eye. But we all agree that the font of number 1 is better.
On design 2, can the shading on the lower half of the design (not the squares but the larger block of shading) be a bit lighter? I think that shading sort of dominates. I like it but maybe a bit lighter.
Entry number 10, current rank #4 is growing on me.
#62 and #63 to fit within the aspect ratio for your website. You could use this horizontal version for website and wider formats, then the vertical version ( #30 ) for other media/print that suited.
#63 I've deepend the colors to fit more within your website as well, though I'm not sure the website is a final template?
Recent feedback from women has raised a serious issue with your graphics. They say that they resemble women's genitals. Once they said it, I couldn't help but agree. We would love to see other entries.
Ok, as long as I'm still ranked in the top 5 I can submit entries while in the 'judging' phase. Would you still like to stay with the tiny squares on the eye surface, and I just change the way the eye is drawn?
I've submitted some new entries/concepts. (Totally avoiding the issue of my original design! :)
All are based on the 'eye' some more abstract than others - conveying the 'innovation' aspect of your company. Recognizable/strong in that the graphic would stand alone as a brand, but work well with the text as well. Happy to make changes to any of the fonts etc.