Oat GoldLogo Design Contest

I just wish you can say that earlier so I don't take to much time for this. Too much revision

Or maybe I just misunderstands with this words " We almost ready to finalize this".

Thank you so much for all your hard work! We love this logo but had to go in a different direction. You're a very talented artist and we wish you luck in all of your other contests.

I like the simplicity of this one but it would be nice for "Oat" and "Gold" to be somehow separated.

Or maybe is it too much colors?

Remove some grains

But I see my rank goes down now. Just let me know if you already have other direction/ change your mine about your logo concept.

This is a great logo but we have our concerns about it being a little too busy. Could you try taking away a few grains? Thanks!

OK, please check #378 #379 #380 and #381

The grain looks great! We would like to see a couple more color options. Could you try these color palettes:

1st Palette:
Maple leaf: ac3410
Woman & grain and "Oat" :52252f
Circle, field, and "Gold": c2770d

2nd Palette:
Maple leaf: a11e1e
Woman & grain and "Oat" :2d373e
Circle, field, and "Gold": af7128

Thanks!

Update on #373 and #374

I'd like to see a version where the circle is a bit bigger. She seems a bit cramped in that space. Thank you

Update with colors as your requested and update on grains look more like oat grains.
Let me know if you need other request to make this contest completed

We're so close to finalizing this one! Could you please make the grain look more like this:
https://www.google.com/search?q=oat+plants&rlz=1CDGOYI_enUS591US592&hl=en-US&prmd=isnv&source=lnms&tbm=isch&sa=X&ved=2ahUKEwiKsJG1zKLpAhURVK0KHSF8DFgQ_AUoAXoECBkQAQ&biw=414&bih=722#imgrc=L916RjCfldvx3M

Also, please make the woman, grain, and the word "Oats" this color: hex (552427). And make sure the gold is this gold: hex (b87800)

Try to get the bottom of the grain to reach all the way out to the left. It should be aligned with the left edge of the "O".

Thanks!

Thank you, please check #317 and #318

Maybe try a darker gold like this one: (#b77713). Play with the brown if you need to.

Also, could you try to get the bottom of the grain to extend to the left more and curve it up a little to the left corner?

Update as your request, but not sure with OAT and GOLD in different color.

Let me know if you need other update.

For this one, could you have the ends of the grain curve up to the left to give the design more balance? Make sure not to extend past the left of the "O".

Also, try to have a solid semicircle behind the artwork. And then have the top of the maple leaf breaking the containment of the circle.

Change the color of the leaf to something more subtle so the focal point is on the woman.

It would be nice to see the text "Oat Gold" in a different color. Maybe both words can be their own color? "Gold" can be in gold?

Please shrink her left hand a tad bit.

Thanks!

Added maple leaf in to logo and variant with the font

Yes, I agree. It's always good to have a main version, but the logo might only be seen on the paper bags. That's why we're so adamant about seeing it on a beige/brown background. But thank you for recognizing that.

I like the hands in this one.

Just suggestion, don't you think you should have "main version" logo?

As example this is the main version with more colors and when you apply your logo in to paper bag then we us "monochrome" version.

This is the other example:
https://imjustcreative.com/wp-content/uploads/2018/06/Apple-Corporate-Identity-Guidelines-Graphic-Standards-Manual-Featured.jpg

Please remember the logo will be printed on a brown paper bag. Please refer to the image of the empty bag we posted for color reference. Thank you.

Thanks again. Just as a reminder from our original instructions, Our producers are in Saskatchewan, Canada, so it would be nice to have a Canadian Maple Leaf incorporated into the imagery, the suggestion of the maple leaf shape in the background, or even have the whole agricultural scene inside the maple leaf. Just an idea.

Thank you for rank and feedback, please check my new update for consideration.

We love how you took our sketch and made it your own! It embodies the descriptions we gave and really speaks to our company image. That said, we would like to see more colors or a monochromatic palette being used. Also, if you can show us another version with a different font, that would be great! This is a good start. Thank you!