Good start. The biggest weakness is Oak Creek Farms is too small. Remember this will be used on our product labels so Oak Creek Farms has to catch your eye a lot more than the farm scene.
Hi, Here's a revision of #35. I reworked my design, enlarging the name of your business, making it more prominent. Let me know if you'd like other revisions. Thanks! Pam
A big improvement. The radius on the farm scene should follow the radius on the shape of the logo like you had in #35. Can you reduce the height on the farm scene a little more so you can increase the height on Oak Creek?
Thanks for the prompt feedback. I'll revise per your suggestion and resubmit. Thanks again!
Pam
PS. I'm currently at work. My LogoTournament files are on my home computer. I will make the revisions this evening when I get home, and post ASAP. Thanks for your patience.
Hi, Here's the revision you requested. I made the double borders follow the oval, and I made 'Oak Farms' taller. Please let me know if you'd like to see any other revisions. Thanks so much! Pam