Hello again, i am really interested in your new entries. i do have some feedback but this is because I like your work but want to see if you can combine some other elements.
On your #42 i love the orange in the middle but prefer the NYS logo and figures from #46. is it possible to use the orange and the sun imagery that #39 and #43 did and still have the NYS logo in the middle too? the colors i prefer are orange, yellow, red, some blue and sometimes green but not the red, green and blue you submitted On #46 i dont care for NYS AHPERD with stars in the middle, maybe on the bottom like in 42 i like the the idea of 3 images, including yours but also like the images in #39 and #50 - they are reaching up and together Also, the type of the theme i like better in #50 it does not have to be exact but prefer something like that.
Thank you for making the changes. I really like them. To tweak the logo:
use #67, with NYS AHPERD underneath but we like the colors of #65 please take out the stars next to NYS AHPERD For the theme - please try some different fonts to make it more interesting, make it a little bigger and also make the words PAST PRESENT and FUTURE all in CAPS
Hi, i was going to ask about that. I really like the sun element, not sure why you can't use a sun? Sun is universal sign and it is what I want in there. I know one designer is mostly using the idea of sun, but i did not think that it was replicating what somone else did? I put in my feedback to everyone that i wanted sun and those types of colors.
i am not sure what i am going to pick now - the new ones you submitted are not what I want. I really wanted #67.
I do not want any blue or green.
The theme is not standing out enough - i need it bigger and brighter. Also, only the words PAST PRESENT AND FUTURE SHOULD BE CAPS.
hello again, i really want to use your design, but to me something is missing now without the sun. i understand the respect for others, but as i look at my entries, several people use images of sun. if you can somehow put the sun back, i would like that. since the sun is not the central part of the logo, maybe it is possible.
another idea i just thought of, is to take out the star and somehow in their do fireworks (celebration)
thank you.
please see what i wrote earlier about the colors and the words.
can you just have the half sun and not all the lines? i think it is too busy.
also take out the white border inside the 2 circles
please capitalize the letters H for honor C for celebrate and E for embrace
can you change the font?
last question - i got some feedback from colleagues now that there are too many circles - if you want to leave the middle and just try to change the words - i would like to see what it might look like.
hi #111 is the one that we prefer the most at this time. my committee is still not sure they like the theme words in a circle around the middle. is there other way to put the theme in a different shape or in a different place? we really are happy with middle (sun, state, figures, color, etc.)
ok, sorry but we are so close and we would like to tweak some more -
the theme is very important and needs to stand out so this is what we are thinking:
Take #115 and enlarge theme words and brighten them. Can you send it to me bigger and brighter like you have it now without a background behind the words and one with?
In order to make the theme words bigger you can make NYS AHPERD smaller if you need to
change the inside figure on left to yellow instead of stars can you do a burst of a firework?
keep the NYS logo, the people and the words NYS AHPERD as is but get rid of the long sun lines, keep the small sun as in 115. Try a firework burst instead of stars
can you then play around with the theme words - maybe this inner design but the words not on a background like in 115. also, maybe with words on the color background but separate them so they don't touch
also try the tweaks for 107 as i mentioned but also do that inner ny logo but put the NYS AHPERD on the bottom like in 115 and the theme words like 115
we like what we see, we just need to see it all together
the theme words should not be upside down - look at 112 and 122. can you send the words in the orange border but in the same layout as 112 and 122 so i can see both? i would also like to see the same changes to the words but in the red border. thanks,
As you can see you are my #1, congratulations. We are very happy with the design. If you can submit any more entries - my group wants to know if the outer red arc can be submitted in another red and or/orange than the ones you have sent. i like the words in the order they are and the white. thanks.
Hi could you please take logo's number 133 and 144 and thin out the outer circle? The width of the circle seems to overpower the inside of the logo. You may be able to keep the font the same size in terms of the words in the circle and just thin the circle itself... Thank you for all of your work on this you are wonderful!!!