#39 is the same as #17 - just added shading on the triangle, added depth and detail to the heart and and red color fade on the circles background color. Same as #40 & #41 just changed different font ideas.
Kib, thank you for your submission. I have chosen your entry (#39) as my first choice so far. Would you be willing to make a few small modifications? 1. Remove the triangle, I realized that part doesn't work. 2. I would prefer a less stylized heart. Just a solid red, symetrical heart. Expanded so that its edges touch the circle. 3. Then place an image of NY state inside the heart (state in black)
Can you try that and see what we get? Thanks so much for your effort.
I just got you're message - I'm at a family event and will be back at my computer in a couple hours, i will jump on the design changes as soon as I get beck to my computer. Thanks, Kib
#44, #45 #46 & #47 - made you revisions you requested. Changed the shape of the heart and added the shape of NY. Gave you a few different versions so compare. Thanks, Kib
Hi Kib Thank you for these revisions. I like them very much.
May I request the following modifications in #47 (now my 1st choice): 1 - Please see what the stars look like colored RED 2 - Let's try to place the NYSAHERD lettering on the bottom and Pride, Pass....etc. on the top of the circle. 3 - Please take a close look at the shape of the inner circumference of the circle. These old eyes see a slight distortion. Thank you.
The heart may be making the circle look a little off - I checked and they correct. I also submitted some different versions. Thanks, Kib
I also have a designer saying I using his idea of putting the state on the heart (I put mine in the heart). I know this is petty, but I wanted to let you know if you see I had to withdraw my design. Since it wasn't something specifically ask for publicly (you sent me a private message) and he gets others to agree with him... all my designs will get pulled. I'm trying to work with him....
Hi Kib Can we try one small tweak? Let's make the font for NYSAHPERD a tiny bit smaller and the font for the Pride, Pass...... just a little bit larger.
Kib did you upload the right logo? It only looks a tiny tiny bit better. Can you see it? it looks bottom heavy. Is it my eyes? Your other logos (not this design) seem to be perfectly round...We are almost there thank you for your kindness...
#55 & #58 are exact circles - #59 has the same circles, but bottom of the heart isn't as round in #59. Having the fatter bottom on heart gives the effect of the circle look heavy at the bottom - so I changed the heart, which then makes the circles look correct. Thanks, Kib
Are you able to do anything with the inside white circle at the bottom? I posted the comment above and have not received a response. Although I did see your response on July 15th the inside white circle still dosent look completely round. Do you think it is an Illusion because of the heart?
I just replied - For some reason I usually get an email that say when someone sends me a message... I just keep checking in every once in a while to see where the contest is. Thanks, Kib