Here are my submissions #2, #3, #4.... Hopefully pleased. Please feel free to contact me for any requests. And please let me know if you need any changes/modification on my entries. Thank you!
The text isn't as readable as it needs to be. Gradients, while fine for print and video, aren't going to translate well to embroidery. Also, use of all three pure red, green, and blue colors isn't required.