I like this, the font shows some eletroluminescence which is what we're going for. However, we want to look at the writing in even more of an electroluminescent font than you have now. Also, we don't want the owl in the logo, we just want the writing in a hip electro font with maybe the hoodie outline picture i uploaded as a background. Try a cool cursive, or think about the RVCA or Stussey brand when doing the font.