Hi, we like your design in entry #53. Could you please try the following:
1. Try a variation of the grey background pattern in the middle with the bridal sketch in the second file we uploaded the other day, preferrably adapted and in a darker (a little more visible) grey tone too.
2. Incorporate the vertical Chinese characters (3 characters) in the third file attachment in this brief. Put it on the left and vertically please.
3. We think some words of the logo should be in pink...try: 3.1 one of the Chinese characters; 3.2 the single word "Dream"...perhaps this word should be in different texture from the rest. 3.3 overlap the word "D" and "O", with the "D" in pink. etc etc.
Done some revisions for your appreciation: #80 | #88 | #81 #91 - i´ve inclued the map of newzealand.
Please let me know what do you think please.
Could you be interested in the add of some maori symbol, like the wave? Or maybe the 4 starts like in the New Zealand flag?
About the bride i will try later when i get out from work and will start the drawing. But i can´t put it as overlay behing the text because another designer have done it. Sorry. I will think on concept for it.
Please let me know if you would like to see any more changes please.
I´ve submit some ideias with the bride. Let me know what do you think.
I didn´t have much time to explore this concept because i get out from work a little late, and the time of the contest is running down fast. I was thinking in making a bride made of tribals, but didn´t had the time for it.
Hope you like my new submissions. Anything you may need please say.