New You LaserLogo Design Contest

we like layout 4, would it be possible to reduce the size of the word Laser and increase the tag line

also, if its possible to use orange and grey for parts of the text that would be great

Thanks

Hi
I am not near my computer right now.I will submit the revision within 12 hrs. Kindly allow me the time.
Thank you
Sreekant

Please find the revisions as advised.

45 is close to what we want. we would like to see a different symbol to make it stand out, something customized to "nyl" and change it to something light blue if possible ,,, thank you!!

but still keep the orange and grey tag line... thanks

hi,

one final batch of revisions... can you use entry 47, and place the underline from 48 under New You.

Can you also make the dot in the NYL portion orange? i have provided the color codes i would like everything to be updated with these...

Orange #f76d19
blue 5CBCE0
grey – #e4e4e4

thank you!

I am on it. WIll submit the revisions shortly

apologies for any confusion, we wanted the line to stay as it was, but the layout of the tagline from 48 placed onto 47.

so basically use 47 and swap in the tag line from 48

can we also try changing the NYL logo into orange, so that it pops more, and the tag line with the green/turqoise color, while keeping the underline

No problem, will submit the revisions shortly

Please find #69 and #70 with changes as advised. Please let me know if you need any changes in the design
Thank you

thanks for the revisions

we really like 73. lets keep that version, and if possible, can we just try one more alternate, with the same layout, but they NYL in the cirlce is orange, just the letters orrange, the circle color stays the blueish color.
with this version, could you also make the YOU orange, and the tag line blue.

so, 73 stays as is, and if we could see a new version, with the NYL letters orange in the circle, in NEW YOU the you orange, and the whole tag line goes to blue, keeping the orange underline.

one final thought is the blue color makes the text look a little thin, is it possible to increase the thickness of the text just a little? if you look at 47 vs 73 the text stands out more, it may just be because of the change in color, but to make the blue show up a little more can you try just making it a shade thicker.

thank you

I am on it, will submit the revisions shortly

ah, one last thing, onthe new version, can you add the period back into the NYL circle? it would just be good to compare to see what wed want on the final

Sure thing, I will submit a version of 73 with the dot

#82 nyl in circle made orange; YOU made orange and tagline made blue

#83 same as above, the only difference the blue is shade a tone thicker

#84 My suggestion, mainly because the shades are crisp and nyl really stands out in white , compared to orange in blue, just a suggetion

#85 is replication of #73 with a dot

As you have said, the thicker shade makes the text stand out

#86 is #84 in a dark background to give a sense of how it would look and a pure version would look like #87

Please ignore 87, pure black and white version would look like #88

thank you, we like 73. nice job!

we like whats number 1, but we like 69 also and would like to see it in one more version. change the circle to blue (matching the colors we like) and change the nyl font to the one you used in 73. the rest can stay as it is.
thank you!

#101 with changes as advised, I have added the period in this one. Do let me know if you do / do not, need the period in the final files, and i will submit accordingly

Thank you
Sreekant

Another request please.
2 version- Id like to see everything the same as 73 in both version, except change the circle and whats in it on both versions- one is to grey and white font- (nyl) and another is to grey circle and (nyl) with thin orange font.

We like the font type on 73 and if you can use the same grey to match the tag as on 73 , would be great. thank you very much!!!!!!!!!!!

No problem here are the revisions,

#102 and #103 have the grey color which matches the grey in 73

#104 and #105 the grey used is #e4e4e4 , as mentioned in the previous comments

102 is good, can you do one the same but without the period/dot please?