New SeedLogo Design Contest

Hi Mistershot's,

Thanks for your logo !
I like the gradation of the colours.

Would it be possible to make the logo more dynamic ?
The move to touch the sky has to be something with action,
certainty.

The way the human is on the logo here makes me that he is
only trying to reach stars, instead of doing it efficiently... :-)

I would see the logo with
a human with only one arm
only one star
and a stronger ground for the "S". I think the normal letter "S" would be great, with the top has a human.

Thanks a lot for your contribution !

Greg

Hello Greg!
Thank you for feedback.
You are right about the human.Needs more action.
I ll try to do the changes you asked for and i will upload as soon as possible!

Filippos

Hi Filippos,

Thanks for your new idea : I really like the n° 96. The idea of the left arm is very good !

Here are some improvements that could make it even better :

About the half circle it is a good idea, it makes it dynamic : But instead of being in the middle (it is cutting the logo), could you make the half circle on THE LEFT of the logo (not cutting the logo) and straight : it could go from the star to the bottom of the S. A little bit like a (

I don't know if what I say is really clear (not easy for me to explain in english !)

And could you put a font more luxury, more class, I would like the letter N to have little dash on the bottom of first I and and on the top of the 2sd I
(for example, I like the font of the logo 105).

And last request : could you change the star ? (the colour is good, but I find that the shape is too rounded). I would like something more straight, with this shape for example :

http://www.google.fr/imgres?sa=X&espv=210&es_sm=91&biw=1680&bih=908&tbm=isch&tbnid=tIp_wRayr6hzUM:&imgrefurl=http://www.ballons-a-gogo.com/voir_p/310/ballon_mylar_etoile_design_40___starpoint_.html&docid=Y62_gUO2D0eR3M&imgurl=http://www.ballons-a-gogo.com/images/MesProduits/ballons_aluminium/autres_formes/ballon_etoile_noire.jpg&w=500&h=500&ei=BJCwUqzLLIfnywOLvYH4Dw&zoom=1&iact=hc&vpx=926&vpy=172&dur=30&hovh=225&hovw=225&tx=118&ty=121&page=1&tbnh=129&tbnw=129&start=0&ndsp=49&ved=1t:429,r:5,s:0,i:98

Thanks a lot for everything !

Hello Greg,
Thank you for the feedback.
I redesigned the previous font i ve used( i added these "dashes") .
I ve changed the star and i believe is lot better now!Made all the changes you asked for!Waiting for your feedback so we can improve it even more!

Your English is very good!Better than mine!Isnt my native language too. :)

Filippos

Hello Filippos,

Thanks for your improvements, it's getting better and better !

I think we are almost there with the 145 and 148... The choice is not easy !!

Just few more feedbacks for both of them (145 and 148) :

- Keep the gradation of the colours, I like it !
But could you use a BLUE more dark, more deep ? It makes the logo more "class", more serious for big companies that I will work with.

We can keep the same GREEN for now, to see how it goes with the new blue.

FEEDBACK FOR ONLY THE 148 :
- Just to see : could you close the orange circle on the RIGHT SIDE of the logo ? I think it will make it more dynamic. I d'like to make it like a dynamic circle, where we can feel the movement.

I think you could start from the right side of the star with the THINE part of the circle, and the circle goes THICKER = exactly what you did on the left side, but reverse it on the right side, so the large circle is on top near the star and the thinest circle is next to the bottom of the S.

what do you think ?

Thank you !

greg

Hello!
Entries #150 , #151!
Couldnt do much for #151!
So i created a new circle for #150 and looks very nice!

Hey !
Thanks a lot !

OK, we are almost done ;-)

My final hesitation is between 150 and 145 now !

2 things :

1° Could you put the same dark blue on the #145 please ?

2° Could you make the circle a little bit more THIN on the #150 please ? (the same width as we have in the #151).

And after that, the choice between those 2 will be hard... !

Thanks

I am glad you like it!
I am going to do these changes now!Uploading soon! :)

Ready!
Entries #152 , #153

Hello,
I am so sorry but i had to remove #150 #151 #153 for being similar with entry #58, other designer did it first and was my mistake i didnt see that entry.there is no problem with entry #152 because the swoosh is only half and not a circle.i dont believe are too similar but i have to respect other designers original idea.under the post comment area please read the contest holder guidelines for posting to understand what i mean..hope you understand.

Filippos

Hello,
I can still submit entries so if you need any more changes to #152 please let me know!

Hi Filippos,

Thanks for your message.

I have to say that I don't know what to do, I am disappointed with logotournament.

What I really want is what you did with the circle... I've send an email to the webside : they say that the solution could be to ask you and Chiang to share the price. Would you agree on that ?

If you don't want to share (which I would understand), would you agree to be the only Winner (I would say your logo Win) but still make improvements for me (we can talk with private emails) after your price ?

Because I like your logo most, but the REAL logo I want is the one you've made with full circle...To me, your work has nothing in common, and that's ME who asked you to try with a full circle.

IN THE MEAN TIME, here are some improvements maybe you can make on the #152 :

- Is it possible to put the half circle in 3D ?
- Is it OK too change the face of the human with a more round Circle ?
- Just to see how it goes, could you also put a little shade under the logo ? Maybe a circle under the whole logo OR, a shade and the N and S
- Finally, could you make the 4 peaks, the 4 points of the star a little bit longer ?

Thanks a lot !! Maybe with those improvements, it will be very good also and we won't need a full circle...
Let's see !!

Hello Greg.
Its complicated.I am new to this website and i dont know either what to do!Yes i can work with you after you pick me as the winner and we can work through mails to improve the logo.
The truth is i dont want to share the price,but i want you to get exactly what you like.
Let me try to do these changes for you and if you are not happy i will share the price.
I have some questions.
You want the half circle in 3d.What do you mean 3d?You have any example?
I am not on my pc now and i will be able to work for these changes today afternoon.
Keep in touch.

Hey Filippos,

Thanks for your answer. I understand very well that you don't want to share the price.

So you are right, let's try some improvements, and we will see. We still have few days left.

By 3D, I mean to add a little border to the half circle, also orange but more dark orange.

Is that more clear for you ?

Hello!
I am back now.Yes it is clear! :)
I will upload my new versions soon!

Entry #156
Star imroved.Face changed to circle.I added the shadow.I added a second color on the swoosh making it more 3d.Waiting for your feedback!

Hey Filippos,

Sorry for my silence, I was busy !

Thanks for your new add, that's great ! 3D is very good, thanks !

2 more things...
Maybe you will find I am boring... but could you make the sides of the star a little smaller ?
I know I've asked you before to make it longer, but it is too long now.

And could you put the logo ON the ground (keep the little shape form, but the logo is more powerful if it is on the ground I think).

I am still a little bit sorry to not be able to see the work you've done when you did the whole circle.
Are you still OK to work a little bit with me by personal email after your price, so I can compare the whole circle and the half circle ?

Best REgards,

Greg

PS : for the star, maybe you can let this size for the side, but make the center a little bit bigger.
I think it will also work !!

THANKS !

Hi Greg,
No problem.I was very busy too!
You are not boring.Thats what we do here! :) Trying to improve the design!I love this procedure!
I can make these changes!I just cant do much with the design with the circle because was another designers proposal but of course we can work by mail to finish the logo and find a solution.
I ll upload soon.

Hi Fillipos,

I hope you had a nice Xmas.

I am glad to say to you that you are the Winner ! ;-)

If you are still OK, we can communicate by emails to improved your logo at his BEST !

Can you send me your adresse please ?

Thanks !

Greg

Hello Greg.
Thank you very much for choosing me a the winner. :)
Please check your email.

Filippos