I hear what your sister is saying, but I think because we have the line under the name, it holds it together ie sub consciously the name is within the board.
This iss fine-tuning again, but does the top element seem to be 'floating' above the NEBC a bit, and could the full club name benefit from a little more breathing room (is it looking a little squished?)? maybe play with spacing a bit.
Oh, no, glad you asked. -- not the gaps between the points, the gaps between the *checkers*. When checkers are placed on the board during play, they are in stacks, with the edges touching, not with gaps between them. You may find in making this change that it makes sense to change the triangle proportions as well, so use your best designer's judgement as to how to make it look best with that requirement. I anticipate that having the white discs touching is going to make for too much unbroken whitespace, but I think my colleagues will need to see this for themselves. Does that make sense?
Hi there. No problem but to just to clarify to make sure I do it right, I’m going to close the gap between the triangles but at the top ie the widest part?
I’ll do this first thing in the morning (I’m based in the UK and have stopped for the evening).
Hi Angus -- passed this by to my colleagues and they had the same question about the checkers not being "firmed up" at the top of each point rather than having gaps between them. Could I trouble you for a version like that? It's the only way to confirm that it's better as-is (which I suspect).
Say -- one more comment -- When I look at all the logos in the contest page, this one (and the 6-point variation) appear substantially smaller than the others -- you have a large white apron around the design. As a result, I don't think you get equal visual impact compared to neighboring designs. Could you submit somewhat larger versions?
While the 6-point version of this logo is more "real looking," I think this one is more visually appealing -- maybe because your brain has fewer details to process. I'm glad to have both options to share with my colleagues.
Ah! Adding room for a third checker does make this a little more "accurate" looking, though I miss a little of the "airy" look of the original. Could we try 321202 on the checkers?
Big improvement win the checker arrangement! Can we try 02210 on top and 00120 on bottom? I don't think the 3D effect on the circumference is quite what we want -- Let's stick with viewing the 'checker' dead-on. Could anything be done with the outer ring to suggest more of an edge or rim?
There's not really a word for it, but I suppose the one thing that I'd say it that its an "all encompassing logo" ie it combines an icon with or within the wording great one element. Hope that helps?
Great. By the way, can you tell me the general name for this style? I can't quite place the word -- not really Nouveau , Deco, Arts & Crafts . . . what's the word?
This is a nice circular design, which can suggest a backgammon checker. Is there is a way to convey this suggestion more strongly without resorting to cheesy '3-D' effects? The symmetry of the two checkers on the field seems maybe a little peculiar -- they seem a little "lonely."
Hi! I'm having great fun with this process! I find all three of your designs immediately appealing, but this one in particular is a favorite. I hesitate to say anything because it is so well balanced as it is. At first glance I wanted the checkers to be compacted, without spaces between as they would be on a board, but then we would lose the little bits of green that are so appealing. I like this a lot as it is!
Welcome to Logotournament - I hope this finds you well and having a good week so far?
Here are some of my concepts. I've created concepts that are simple, yet striking and unique! The logos are 100% vector so will scale well to any size, and works well in full colour, B&W and on coloured backgrounds if needed.
It would be my pleasure to work up any variations so please do say.
I look forward to your comments or thoughts.
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I hear what your sister is saying, but I think because we have the line under the name, it holds it together ie sub consciously the name is within the board.
No problem, will space out the club name a bit.
Cheers
Angus
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I’ll do this first thing in the morning (I’m based in the UK and have stopped for the evening).
Have a great rest of your Friday.
Cheers
Angus
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Thanks for the feedback on all my entries!
No problem at all completely understand on the ranking front.
Will upload a larger square one in a moment.
Cheers
Angus
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With regards to the spacing - no problem at all, let me make them bigger and resubmit for you.
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Glad you're have a great experience with the process, that's how it should be :)
Thanks for the great feedback and ranking, very much appreciated.
I can definitely experiment with making the checkers closer - can't hurt to see what it does to the overall look and feel.
Cheers
Angus
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Welcome to Logotournament - I hope this finds you well and having a good week so far?
Here are some of my concepts. I've created concepts that are simple, yet striking and unique! The logos are 100% vector so will scale well to any size, and works well in full colour, B&W and on coloured backgrounds if needed.
It would be my pleasure to work up any variations so please do say.
I look forward to your comments or thoughts.
Regards,
Angus