Yeah. I like that one better for sure. I love how clean it is. I'm trying to think what I would change to bump it up in ranking... I'll think and get back to you. If you have any other concepts, I'd love to see them. I really like your style. I'm going to post a comment on the main page that might help you. Thanks for the entry!
here something more alive for you. i made in a circle because this make more easer and cheap aplication in all medias, like a business card and a banner