if you like the concept but not the design...please inform me, i can take the concpet and create a totally different design. the concept is using the NO the letters from NeroNote...
Hello Vidi, thanks a lot. Those concepts are interesting, I especially like the colors and the combination of typeface "stability" with a lighter, friendly hand drawn mark.
I prefer the typeface from the #39 on, rather than #38. Maybe it can be tried smoothed, with less hard edges.
The use of the NO letters emoticons alike is smart.
On #41, #42 it looks probably too "young", a ruffled cheeky face. We're addressing even men of 50 yo for their directional office shirts, to make an example.
Marks on #38 and #39 are a more interesting direction.
Shame is "no" has a negative meaning, by definition. I can't imagine a shirt with "no" embroidered on its pocket. Please don't feel bounded by the brand lettering, a pictorial or abstract graphical mark of fantasy might well apply.
allora invece di usare NO...ho usato "on"....a much more positive meaning, don't you think? #86 (you're "on" with neronote)....the "on" is perfect do to the fact that you are a clothing apparel...so that would make great sense...Put ON your NERONOTE, very clever i think.
Those marks would work well on a website maybe but we have to use it also embroidered let say on a shirt pocket, just the mark, with no letters. Once alone they would loose the conceptual reference and become too generic, anonymous. While it would need personality, visibility, kind of uniqueness.
For the same reason the mark should also need to be detachable from the name, and not have shades.
If you like I'd start from #87, where the "on" highlighted idea is cool, and replace the mark above.
Thanks
PS. Please help me understand how the designers use this site. What does it mean when you withdraw a proposal ? Did I do anything wrong ?
withdrawing a proposal means a few things: a designer deletes their submission when you say "not interested" , also, if the designer makes some edits...they may want to withdraw the previous entree. Also, we may withdraw if we feed our design is risking to be copied by other designer...we delete it to protect its integrity and originality. These designs are still available to you if you just ask the designer to put it back up. No, you did not do anything wrong.