Hello apple berry. Fonts used for #152 is great, could you please try to get it wider and maybe splitting the words on two colors (not too bright).
Whereas the mark is quite anonymous and too dark. We would place it also on shirts pockets, it would need to have more personality, be more unique, be easy to recognize.
There are nice directions taken on proposals ranked high, maybe you can get some inspiration from there and make your personal proposal.