Calispera Mkdes!gn, the concept looks very cool either direct and inversed.
There's an issue with the laurel napoleonic crown, as it's already used by www.fredperry.com. Can you try some variation, possibly keeping the graphical mark in between the text is appreciated.
"e" looks pretty much esprit.com style but it's cool, as well as the wide letters spacing.
We would love to see a try with some limited "color contamination".
Also possibly show them on solid white background as it would be closer to a real case.
buon pomeriggio! Ringraziamenti per le osservazioni! Lavorerò stasera al segno grafico, per quanto riguarda colore, voi gradicono un bordo piacevole? Ringraziamenti molto per le vostre parole gentili. Il mio italiano è poco un arrugginito, io ha passare 2 anni in Sardenia.
The mark on #131 is pretty and feasible, though when used alone on a shirt it would be too generic and anonymous. #74 was the best, too bad it can't be used.
#171 is interesting, I have to discuss it with my peers before to rank it.