i like where you are going with this - definitely interesting and different from many other logos submitted. more cutting-edge, modern look
wonder if we can try a couplf of things
- excentris in all small cap (vs title caps)
- keeping everything else the same, try to replace the bars with the idealized representation of a triangle (the concept of EXCENTER - google images for EXCENTER, does not have to be literal but maybe this strikes your creativity and imagination)
- make spheres more 3d
- play with colors (red and black? orange and grey? blue and black? grey and black? any other combination?)
many thanks!
svetlana