good stuff. simple. the guys like #75 the most but want to make sure people dont think it's a league (like NBA, etc). not sure how to convey that, but your on the right track with edgy NLS. good stuff!
#108 is sharp. would like to see it without the shading. also a version of that in just BLACK / WHITE...to see how looks from from. great work kooldog!
#117 without the line going through the N might be good. also the NATIONAL LACROSSE SHOWCASE spelled out below it may look better without shadowed there. just sharp , easy to read text.
without making it look cheesy, would it be possible put a lacrosse ball inside one of the letters (or outside)...or even a lacrosse stick? a new submission from another artist put a ball inside the N and looked sharp. Seems like that might be the final cherry on top for us. ha. thanks again!
Hey hope you had a good weekend. even though we didnt love the ball within the NLS we like your style and want you to win.
that said our last request is to combine your letters (which are awesome) with the lacrosse head/ball. Just like #169 (2nd place) uses. something simple, that could be used alone. his version is nice but we like your style and letters way better. the half red/ half black is cool too but dont feel like you need to replicate it. thank you for your help. we're almost done. promise/i hope :)
1. instead of a circle can we see an angled square around the stick / ball? fitting into place nicely with the N, of NLS?
2. the shape of the lacrosse head is different than the one in #169. we really like the shape of #169 - as it has a simple feel. almost old school / retro feel. simple and cool looking.
3. lastly for the ball in motion, we could do without the "streak" and just see a lacrosse head with ball.
#205 is very good. the lacrosse head looks weird . i think #169 nailed theirs but dont want you to have to steal it. something closer to theirs would work better.
also, their placement of the ball is better than in the letters...but maybe you wanted to mix it up. thank you.