NarleybirdLogo Design Contest

Hi,

Let me know what you think about my character. Is it goofy enough?
I will still play with color and especially the text. I need to know if I am going to the right direction.

Please leave feedback for improvement.

Cheers,

Gagu

i like the character and where you are going. I like design # 6, but would sugget we try removing the wording (Narley Bird) and using the background circle from design # 7 with the circle in the background. Let's also try reoving the green feathers under the beak and the toungue. Wondering also what the beak would look like with a smirk compared to the smile.

Hello,

Glad to hear that. :-)
Do you like the smirk beaks of entries #9 and #10?

Cheers,
Gagu

#11 and #12 are different smirks :-)

#13 is different smirk beak and eyes

Gagu,
I think the original beak looks best from design # 6 07 7 without the toungue. Can we try design # 6 without the toungue, wording and green feathers?
Also can we try a version with the eyes more droopy with the lids and pupils centered, like the other design I have posted from Fracco in design # 8. Can you see this one?
For the background on the new design, can we try one version with the blue circle from design # 7 and one with no circle like in design # 6 without the wording?
Cheers,
Keith

Hi,

Entries #14 and #15 are from #6 with more droopy eyes as you wish.
I am sorry about my poor English :-), Does lids and pupils centered mean crossed eyes?
#16 has droopy eyes but the eyes are not crossed

#17 is improvement of #6 with background like #7

#18 and #19 have a little different beaks. I made them less smiling and more to smirk.

Happily waiting for feedback :-)

Cheers,
Gagu

Gagu,
Thanks for the new drawings. Seems like the bird appears happier with the eyes not droopy like you have them in design 6 & 7. Let's just try# 6 & 7 without the toungue, green feathers and wording. Feel free to extend his smile to make him happier looking and maybe try his toungue straight in the middle of his mouth/beak.
My direct e-mail is eltman1@yahoo.com. Please feel free to e-mail me directly as well, as I have many other logo ideas and would like to continue working with you directly if you are interested.
Cheers,
Keith

Hello,

Kindly see my latest update on new smile and new tongue :-)

Thanks. Any differenc between design # 25 & # 22?

Hi,

#25 has bigger smile and tongue than #22 :-)

Thanks. I moved that in to the # 1 spot. Feel free to make any additional revisions that you think will make him any funnier or better looking. Lookspretty good though.
Thanks.

All right. I will keep uploading many variations for you to see :-).
I replied to your email, please check.

Cheers,
Gagu

Hi,

#42 and #43 have the biggest smile and are in high detail :-)

Cheers,
Gagu

Thanks. Can you try a version of # 45 with his face also light brown like his chest color and the stripe color of his arm.
Thanks.

Hello,

#46 - #48 are ranging from dark face to brighter :-)
Let me know what you think.

Gagu

Thanks. # 48 looks good, but I think # 25 still looks the best. Not sure if any improvementsare needed Would be curious to see how # 25 would look if the color of his face was the light gray like his chest & belly. Thanks again for your responsiveness. Look forward to working with you in the future, once we complete this contest.

Hi,

Check #50 to #53 for light gray faces and its variations.
Sure, I look forward to designing more for you :-)

You can complete the test any time you want, if sooner perhaps we can save time.
But it is all up to you :-)

Cheers,
Gagu

I think # 50 looks best.
Thanks.

Hi,

Glad to hear that :-)
If you have found what you are looking for, you can close the contest and I will send the source file in EPS and JPG immediately, or you can wait until contest automatically ends in 2 days.

Cheer,
Gagu