Let me know what you think about my character. Is it goofy enough? I will still play with color and especially the text. I need to know if I am going to the right direction.
i like the character and where you are going. I like design # 6, but would sugget we try removing the wording (Narley Bird) and using the background circle from design # 7 with the circle in the background. Let's also try reoving the green feathers under the beak and the toungue. Wondering also what the beak would look like with a smirk compared to the smile.
Gagu, I think the original beak looks best from design # 6 07 7 without the toungue. Can we try design # 6 without the toungue, wording and green feathers? Also can we try a version with the eyes more droopy with the lids and pupils centered, like the other design I have posted from Fracco in design # 8. Can you see this one? For the background on the new design, can we try one version with the blue circle from design # 7 and one with no circle like in design # 6 without the wording? Cheers, Keith
Entries #14 and #15 are from #6 with more droopy eyes as you wish. I am sorry about my poor English :-), Does lids and pupils centered mean crossed eyes? #16 has droopy eyes but the eyes are not crossed
#17 is improvement of #6 with background like #7
#18 and #19 have a little different beaks. I made them less smiling and more to smirk.
Gagu, Thanks for the new drawings. Seems like the bird appears happier with the eyes not droopy like you have them in design 6 & 7. Let's just try# 6 & 7 without the toungue, green feathers and wording. Feel free to extend his smile to make him happier looking and maybe try his toungue straight in the middle of his mouth/beak. My direct e-mail is eltman1@yahoo.com. Please feel free to e-mail me directly as well, as I have many other logo ideas and would like to continue working with you directly if you are interested. Cheers, Keith
Thanks. I moved that in to the # 1 spot. Feel free to make any additional revisions that you think will make him any funnier or better looking. Lookspretty good though. Thanks.
Thanks. # 48 looks good, but I think # 25 still looks the best. Not sure if any improvementsare needed Would be curious to see how # 25 would look if the color of his face was the light gray like his chest & belly. Thanks again for your responsiveness. Look forward to working with you in the future, once we complete this contest.
Glad to hear that :-) If you have found what you are looking for, you can close the contest and I will send the source file in EPS and JPG immediately, or you can wait until contest automatically ends in 2 days.