this is a beautiful piece - very original, very artistic. I can't really suggest any improvements at this point - it seems so well put together. This is a finalist for sure. We will eventually use the winning logo as a sign; so maybe some revisions with the logo inside a rectangle or circle may help. thanks!
A version of the original in which I've "matured" the face a bit (concerned that it was perhaps a bit too round and child-like). I've added a slight angle to her eyes, and narrowed her nose a touch.