Hi Pam, I am so sorry that Dr. Sid did not get to look at any of the designs yet. Yours is different and I like the motion in it. The kids look happy, not crazed and out of control. Somehow, though, they look a little too American to me. I'm not quite sure what gives me that impression (am from the US myself). Maybe the pink dress and baseball cap. A suggestion might be to do something ever so slightly ethnic with the clothing. I will try to post some ideas for you. Also, could you look at doing something a little more interesting with the type? I like the fonts you used for the clinic name in both 17 and 32, but somehow the dr's name is a little lost. Maybe just needs to be a little bigger. And possibly bolder overall, since the illustration is quite bold. Hope this helps. Lisa
Thanks Pam, those few changes make a big difference. Still waiting to have the big powwow with Sid. He hasn't seen any of the designs, so he's going to be spoilt for choice! Lisa