Thanks for your entries. I'm not sure you're on the right track, since I think we were looking for something friendly and a bit light-hearted, but I'll rerank after speaking with Dr. Sid this evening.
Hi Chakry, Since we have extended the open phase by a day to allow Dr Sid to review the designs, I thought I could give you a bit of my own perspective before he does his first ranking. We are looking for something colorful and cheerful; the overall impression your design is earthy. Also, the outline around the children's faces drags the design down and makes it look badly cut out. The African child's skin tone is a bit too dark to enable the features to be viewed easily. It is like peering into a well. If you can rework these addressing my concerns and with more color, perhaps you can secure yourself a spot as on of our top 5 designers before the open phase ends. Many thanks and good luck, Lisa
Hi Chakry, Since we have extended the open phase by a day to allow Dr Sid to review the designs, I thought I could give you a bit of my own perspective before he does his first ranking. We are looking for something colorful and cheerful; the overall impression your design is earthy. Also, the outline around the children's faces drags the design down and makes it look badly cut out. The African child's skin tone is a bit too dark to enable the features to be viewed easily. It is like peering into a well. If you can rework these addressing my concerns and with more color, perhaps you can secure yourself a spot as on of our top 5 designers before the open phase ends. Many thanks and good luck, Lisa