MyPrivateArmyLogo Design Contest

Here my design alternative: Use the arrow cursor (online) to create a military rank in the abstract. If you have comments, please let me know.

Greetings.

(This comment references Entry #14)

#14 and #15:

Thank you for your submissions. The use of the spears to create a star is interesting, although I am not totally committed to it. I wouldn't mind seeing other options as well.

I am not sure why the word "online" is there. I would rather it not be.

I also think that the logo in general (font, color choices, etc.) are WAY too military. If you look at my comments on other submissions, I want to de-stress (at least a little bit) the military theme. Please think of this "virtual sales force" that my business is providing as a highly effective team. MyPrivateArmy means: (1) that as a small business I can have MY OWN sales force and (2) that this sales force will be LARGE and EFFECTIVE. Other than that, the analogy between the military and my business model falls way short. Rather the business name is based upon an the expression in American English of amassing a "private army" to accomplish something.

Thanks a lot, and I look forward to future submissions!

Here my design alternative. I used the sales force at an angle to create the concept for the future, equipment, union. If you have comments, please let me know.

Greetings.

(This comment references Entry #19)

#19...

I like the fresh idea. The theme is good, and I agree the conceptual elements you mentioned above are well conveyed. The font is kind of "iRobot", which is interesting, and does indeed convey the future. I would like SLIGHTLY less seriousness, though. The logo is a good start but still a bit stark. The shade of blue doesn't work for me.

Thanks!

#36 - pretty cool. once again a fresh take. text is still futuristic, which is cool. at the same time i wonder if it will work well at the top of a web page. not sold on that. the spears are nicely drawn. i'm wondering what other colors might work well. please don't make it light blue, though. dark blue or ANY other color is fine, but i'm overloaded on light blue. seems to be everyone's favorite!

thanks!

#45...

I like the color of blue that you used and also the new change to the drawing. I am looking at the spears, though, and I wonder if the spearheads shouldn't be slightly more prominent - now they might be confused for fighter jets in formation with contrails behind them.

While the font style is not bad, I think there's too much gray both in the text and the drawing. Gray doesn't make for a compelling website.

Thanks!

#76 and #77

I don't like the lighter shade of blue that was chosen here. Seems like you can discern the spearheads better, though, which is good.

I think the "my" is way too subtle. This word is important for us, although some minimization might be tolerable if done well.

#80 and #81

Nice. Can you emphasize "My" with different color rather than "Army" ?

Thanks