Wow, thanks for the entry! The shape grabs your attention for sure. Here are a couple of suggestions:
I really like the font style and position used in #2 entry, so let's try your icon with that font style -- IE, put your icon to the left of the font used in #2
Also, I envisioned "gold star service" as a possible marketing angle when I saw your logo. Can we make the star a little larger, and give it a shiny gold finish?
By the way, "Company" in your logo is missing the "n"
Thanks again for joining the contest