Hi Restless, I think you had some possibilities with your designs but if you read the comment section on the main design page you will notice that we indicated our preference for lighter fonts, not so bold and brash. Your design number 28 was the best in my view due to your idea of reducing the word "My" and tucking it away. The word Print is just too bold though and I feel you could separate the words quite adequately with the different colours used.
Thank you for your effort and I send you my regards
Dear Graham, thx for your feedback. i have uploaded my design with new lighter font. hope can fit with what u looking for. and please let me know if u want something changing about my design.