Could you bring greater focus to OPS in entry #5? This actually looks a bit out of focus. The strength of our service/brand is to take over their operations so that they can liberate their vision and focus on what they do best. We do the rest.
You have done some amazing work for Business Blah. I don' know exactly what their service is but it looks to support entrepreneurs in some way perhaps similar to us. I'd like to see our design with a more original look. The reason we named it MYOPSZONE was to have the feeling of being in the zone with a set of controls that make the objective clear and easy to reach.
Using #32, Can you leave the ops graphic as is and take out the line between the two. Can you leave the font of "myOPSzone" alone but add some color like #33 and also add color to "my" and "zone". Maybe a pattern of blue, green, blue? see what you think goes with the graphic. Let me know if you have questions..
I prepared these based on your feedback #62, #63. If you like we can play with the colors more. I just didn't want to throw many color combinations at once not to get ourselves confused. But please do let me know if we need to see more, it will be my pleasure to work on them. Thank you.