Both of these images look too much like something you'd see at a sports stadium. I need a very polished/sleek feel. I like the way you tried to incorporate the broken part...but it comes off a bit cartoonish for me...
FYI, I looked at your portfolio and the work you did for sky pass and...man, one other that I can't remember, were really solid designs. They weren't what I would want for my biz, but they are really good. So I hope you'll continue to submit designs!
This is more to my liking, but I don't like that so many designers were just giving me a letter b or BB. This business is so much more than just a letter.
I'm looking for something representing art, vintage, cameras, robots made from old camera parts, and photography. I don't think that can be done with just a letter.
I'm still ranking you bc I like some of the work in your portfolio.