Thank for partiicpating to my contest. Please find bellow some feedbaclk about your proposition.
In general I likethe effort you make to design something like web2.0 logo. My pefered entries are #26 and #21. Those graphical elements are in line with my expectation thaht the logo will be a fondamental elemnt to deferenciate me from competitors. I do think the graphical element need to use the bleu color. The fontstyle is ok but I do not feel really confortable with it event if the main idea is there. I also want the brand name to be more "big" comparig to the graphical element..
If you need any further detail do not hesitate to answer my comment;
Thanks for the feedback. I created these variations:
#47, #48 both with a different font that suits more in my opinion. The name bigger and muzik in white to make it pop more (since the icon is blue) The cloud stands for the internet btw.
I have took a lond time to look to your proposition #47 #48. In my entourage some like and some do not like. My opinion is shared.
I like the way it is nice, clear simple! So web2.0 ! But on the opposite side I'm not sure it will really deferenciate my brand form another.
May be you can try something more risky.
I like your explanation. I do agree thaht the fontstyle suit well with you design. I trus that you can add a little something that will make it event better. OK for "Muzik" In white no problem for me. The icon in blue is also a good inspiration.
2 more comment about icons: from my opinion the play button is linked to song (music) but could be also like to video. If you do not have the brand name next to it you can make a confusion. Could you find a way to linked it more to song.
The music note is related for music that for sure, but my first impression when I saw it was more about classical music than song. This is my opinion I have share it with friend of mine they are all agree with me.
I tried to give you some more feedback later after your new proposals.
I created a cloud with a play button in the middle. To refer to play button to music, I extented the lengths of the cloud to create a headphone in the negative space. I also pushed the 2.0 a little more. Let me know what you think.
I prefer the cloud Icon has you designed it for the #84 My point of view is the same for the fontstyle. #84 is from my point of view much better than #98 fontstyle.
When I said you can improve it I though about how can you add the little something thaht will make le brand name look a bit less "nude". May you add soem fantasy, I think thaht without changing to much the font style you can play the "brand name".
Hi please find here some feed back about entry#101.
I see you have made some change into the brand name graduation. I think that the previoux submission#84 was looking better due to the fact that puttin music in white was able to equibrate the repartition of colors from my opinion.
No much thing to say the fontstyle is good may be you can make it give the idea of movement. About the general aspect of the logo I invite you to get a look to the brief maybe it will give you some more idea linked to the general concept of my business.
Thanks again for the feedback. I created the following variations. (Idea of movement added)
#104 - eye icon refers to discovering new artists/music #105 - star icon refers to favorite new music #106 - share icon #107 - magnifying glass, looking for music/artist #108 - browsing
Sorry for did not give lot of feed back yesterday and today (lot of work to do).
Last entry #121 shows a remarquable imrpouvment. One question why do you change from italic to normal fontstyle? Do you men something or is it just for the view effect?
from my opinion both bleu and grey graduation go to dark (almos bark grey) making difficult the bottom of words.
Thank for your explananation about logo signification.
According to me your logo express everything but one thing. Get a new look to "Top Three Things to Communicate through our Logo" you will find it straight.
I want to thnak you specially for the quality of your proposal. Even if you are not first this time I'm sure you have no hésitation about your desigenr skill. Great job !
May be I will contact you directly in the comming month for another logo .